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When you fall in love with someone
Who's in love with someone else
You find you'll want that someone
To have no one but yourself

Since they're in love with someone
There's naught to do for help
When you fall in love with someone
Make sure that there's no one else

Love's a trick and love's a trap
When there's nothing you can do
So fall in love with someone
Who will love no one but you

That rarely ever happens
But trust me if you do
Don't ever stop that someone
From ever loving you
©2008-2009 ~Violet-Butterflies
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Like they say; the concept is good but then life happens so it doesn't work.
Even though we all wish it does. OwO
C'est la vie.
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Love is fickle. -sigh- Good job anyway for conveying that.

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What's fickle?

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"I close my eyes and suddenly I dream.
I leave myself and I’m suddenly me.
I’m famous, I’m rich, I’m powerful
I govern over my pillow clouds and blanket valleys."
Fickle is when it's easily changeable, erratic. I was just commenting in general of how love can be so unpredictable.

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It really... really... can

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"I close my eyes and suddenly I dream.
I leave myself and I’m suddenly me.
I’m famous, I’m rich, I’m powerful
I govern over my pillow clouds and blanket valleys."
You definitely hit the right note on that one. :D

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I am also a volunteer at ~100ThemeWriters and *35-prompts-challenge. Check them out if you're a writer!

The more you read, the better you write.
:) The most recent one is sad...
But we find reasons to be happy.

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"I close my eyes and suddenly I dream.
I leave myself and I’m suddenly me.
I’m famous, I’m rich, I’m powerful
I govern over my pillow clouds and blanket valleys."

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